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U Stood There
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My hearts apart
It’s on the floor
Scattered in pieces
With nothing more
Pick um up
Or let um fall
Whad you do
Nothing at all
You stood there
My heart it bleeds
Every painful
memories
You stood and watched
With out a care
And know I wonder
Why your there
Is it funny
Watching me
Going through
This insanity
My heart it yearned
For something more
But all it got
Was a slamming door
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2004-09-26 22:49:49]
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Re: U Stood There
(User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:10:45 AM AEST
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| Yet another master piece by such an awesome poet and I am so hungry for more of you. You have this awesome ability to reach inside of your readers so deeply and touch their soul. Great Job. Your Reading Fan MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: U Stood There
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:47:38 AM AEST
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| Another master peice, I hope my comment dosent sound cold or heartless in anyway, it just your poems, remind me of past hurts, and they are composed with raw feeling and an awesome inner talent,you paint such vivid images, to the point I feel what the hurt is doing too you, Anyhows thank you for sharing this poem of yours. |
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