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Tiny Red Rubies (Not Like In the Movies)
Contributed by
Lee
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:16:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Long, bright stems
Green prickly gems
They say
It's fool's gold
The document
Is sealed
With wax
And mold
A crumpled leaf
Like Pegasus'
Swollen legs
Tired and
Out of
Breath from
Trying to
Outrun
The jaws
Of Cerberus
And thus:
Camouflages wings
Copyright ©
Lee
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2004-09-26 22:16:58]
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Re: Tiny Red Rubies (Not Like In the Movies)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:10:02 PM AEST
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| This poem is a little beyond me. It seems good I just don't understand it. |
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Re: Tiny Red Rubies (Not Like In the Movies)
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by arden on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:43:34 PM AEST
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hmmm interesting.
but like the other comment im sorta having trouble under standing it.
i guess its one of those poems that you read and you make when you want of it. i dunno.
but i liked it. it made me think. nicely written, good word usage.
5 stars
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Re: Tiny Red Rubies (Not Like In the Movies)
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 06:33:05 AM AEST
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I will not pretend I understand what you were trying to convey but It still was an enjoyable read and I like ones that make me think
Shari |
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