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Encouraging Them Meteorite Children
Contributed by
Lee
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:10:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Fragments of
Wishful thoughts
Translucent &
Drained no
One's noticed
The look
Of a
Face
Wearing vexation
Times tables
No matter
How able
It remains unstable
No matter how able it remains unstable
Depictions of surrogate dictions
Then: a grasp that is a vivid off-white
(Drained as previously explained)
Inscribes an introspective structure
Providing testament against animal carnage
So animals don't get bargains
Copyright ©
Lee
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2004-09-26 22:10:49]
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Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children
(User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:17:33 AM AEST
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You say that my message was unclear!!
lol, i mean, i was going to say, poetry does
have to have a meaning
many of mine are riddles of my life
which, i to cannot grasp lol
But i couldnt grasp this..
It was very interesting and somewhat appealing
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Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:18:27 AM AEST
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| poetry doesnt have to have a meaning / message (i meant) |
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Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:57:20 AM AEST
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| You have a freaky way with words, but have to admit, I am at a loss on this one :( I mean no slight to the author, guess me just to dumb to see through the words. |
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Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children
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by arden on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:14:37 AM AEST
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creepy write.
i liked it. i like your style of writing. its different no one else that i know of uses it and thats what makes it special.
youve got alot of talent lee. dont let anyone every tell you different.
5 stars
Arden |
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