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whatever you want to call it
Contributed by
spyke_420
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:58:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Slice your rist, cut your vain
Blood runs down your arm like a tear on a sad sad face
But who is there to wipe the tear?
No one
Just like no one to stop your tears of blood and to keep you from dieing
Copyright ©
spyke_420
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2004-09-26 21:58:37]
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Re: whatever you want to call it
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:25:16 PM AEST
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| excellent write, but you need to work on spelling. |
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Re: whatever you want to call it
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:47:00 PM AEST
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| awesome, but yes, the spelling... |
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Re: whatever you want to call it
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by SWCSuzyQ on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:00:52 PM AEST
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| good job, tragic, lonely, sad, the spelling--dictionary under reference on the left |
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