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operator
Contributed by
megan
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:05:26 PM in AEST
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You’re so out of place
So disconnected
Your a little girl
On her way home from school
With a backpack more
Then half her size
It’s all so different
The way the light hits it
You shouldn't have to think
About everything that you say
But still so much is wrong
With the way that you say it
Everyone else in the world
Is getting ready for Friday night
And I'm still stuck on Tuesday
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megan
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2004-09-26 21:05:26]
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Re: operator
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:53:21 PM AEST
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I'm guessing your in high school and you feel out of place amongst everyone...I may be wrong,but if I'm not,don't worry,high school sucks,but the rest is great.THEN,your life really starts,you create it according to your needs and dreams.Don't give up,Friday will come. =)
PumpkinPie
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Re: operator
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:54:58 PM AEST
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| feels like im the one carrying the backpack ::sigh:: |
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Re: operator
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by whoelse on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:59:05 PM AEST
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| wow lots of emotion...i like the way you wrote it |
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Re: operator
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:05:01 AM AEST
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| Such a beautifully composed poem by a very intelligent poet. Change is a hard adaption and everyone needs a gentle loving push from time to time to find their grove. You are awesome and your style is wonderful. Great write. Please have a peek at some of mine and let me know. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: operator
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by inoc on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:41:59 AM AEST
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I do enjoy your write....beautifully written
I think I know what you mean and....
I'm sure we have all been through it sometime in our lives
cheers!~ |
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