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Soul Mate
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your love is my heartbeat
Your pain my thorn
Your sould is my life's blood
Your sorrow my scorn
My breath is your spirt
My heart your shroud
Keeping you warm within it
Holding you proud
Nothing will take this
This love we have found
I will take what you give me
Every touch, every sound
We walk on blindly
A world full of changes
Knowing not what is ahead
An open book, blank pages
With you by my side
We set a path through the storm
A future uncertain
But a bond is born
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-11 10:30:00]
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Re: Soul Mate
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 10:38:44 AM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem
i really enjoyed reading this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 01:27:02 PM AEST
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| Beautiful I liked this! Christina |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by BigMike on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:37:33 AM AEST
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| Great write 8 ) |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:46:19 AM AEST
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How unknowingly lucky is this bloke,
This will be a beautiful journey for one so lucky as to travel it with you Candice.
I love this one, it comes across so gently and with lovely meaning from your heart.
I'm looking forward to reading more and more like this.
And I think you are heaps of fun to talk with as well, thankyou.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:06:22 AM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you like it. Everytime I read one of your comments it makes me feel really good about my poetry. And I am also glad that you like talking with me, I enjoy talking to you as well.
ShadowsCloud |
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