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Suicide
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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it's not the way
it shouldn't happen today
it shouldnt happen at all
i don't want to watch them fall
everyone can be free
just look at me
everyone has something to say
don't take it to heart,not today
suicide,it's just not cool
suicide,don't be a fool
suicide,theres more to life
suicide,don't look at the knife
with the look of beath in their eyes
they feel they're nothing,i hope they realize
that life is not about death
it's about making your future,poor little beth
being a victim isn't great
it's not their fate
they're not in the right state of mind
victims can be so blind
somethings happen in everone's life
but theres no need to pick up the knife
commiting suicide is just not right
commiting suicide means you're weak
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Re: Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:15:15 PM AEST
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| very nice, but the last line just doesnt fit in because of the rhyme scheme. i hope you win your contest. =] |
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Re: Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:15:34 PM AEST
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| very nice, but the last line just doesnt fit in because of the rhyme scheme. i hope you win your contest. =] |
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Re: Suicide
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by lilracer37 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:02:00 PM AEST
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| its good, they were right the last line doesnt fit |
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Re: Suicide
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
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| i like dis oooo ur good :) they might be weak in ways but they gotta be sumwhat stong to even think about doin it but yea suicide is a weak way to get outta life |
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