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As a tear rolls down
Contributed by
quiet1
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:18:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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As a tear rolls down my cheek,
I wonder if I will ever amount to anything
As a tear rolls down my cheek,
I wonder if I will ever be truely happy
As a tear rolls down my cheek,
I wonder how much harder life could get
As a tear rolls down my cheek,
I wonder if I will ever be in love
As a tear rolls down my cheek,
I wonder if I will be able to survive ten years from now
As a tear rolls down my cheek,
I wonder will my dreams ever become reality
As a tear rolls down my cheek,
I wonder if.........
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Re: As a tear rolls down
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:26:43 PM AEST
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WOW, I can TOTALLY relate to this.....I often find myself wondering the same things, I thought I was the only one. This is totally amazing, it's deep. Thanks for sharing it.
Katie |
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Re: As a tear rolls down
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by Archie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:41:16 PM AEST
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| All one can really do is live life day by day and hope it does not get too bad. This poem is a good write |
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Re: As a tear rolls down
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:19:24 PM AEST
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| very nice, but i cant stand the redundancy in this. i never will like the same verse in a poem repeated every stanza. other than that, your questions deserve answers, but whats inside and time are the only things able to tell. |
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Re: As a tear rolls down
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:14:53 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: As a tear rolls down
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by inoc on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:10:16 AM AEST
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I REALLY GOT A LOT OUT OF THIS POEM
THANKS FOR SUBMITTING
CHEERS!~ |
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