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Everyday
Contributed by
quiet1
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:06:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Everyday I wake up in hopes that today will be a better day,
Everynight I go to bed with my hopes crushed
Everyday I wake up and think todays gonna be a good day,
Everynight I go to bed with the thoughts of how bad the day was
Everyday I wake up and think lifes going to change,
Everynight I go to bed with life being exactly the same
Everyday I wake up and think today I'm going to find a end to my loneliness,
Everynight I go to bed still alone
Everyday I wake up and wonder why i bother,
Everynight I go to bed and wonder if this misery is worth it
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Re: Everyday
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:16:08 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, quiet1. Let me be the first to thank you for jumping in and sharing your work with us. I'm sure many here will find your first post to be relatable. And... I'm sure you will find a lot of support and understanding here!
Again, welcome!
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Re: Everyday
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:25:28 PM AEST
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| well im a pessimist, so all the things you are optomistic about i just think are going to happen, and no way around it. great write, and excellent last stanza. |
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