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Push and Break
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:21:46 PM in AEST
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You pushed me.
Right down the stairs.
My head banging on the cement steps.
My blood everywere.
My white boned skull showing beyond my torn skin and hair.
My arm broken showing the bone throught my delicate skin.
My leg mangled in blood and bone.
My ribs pushed in not killing my heart and lungs.
My neck almost intact.
Leaving me alive.
Alive to this broken pain.
You pushed me right down the stairs; now you broke me.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2004-09-26 16:21:46]
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Re: Push and Break
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by shelby on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:59:21 PM AEST
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woaw I hope this was an intense poem and not something that happened to you for real life
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Re: Push and Break
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:19:16 PM AEST
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Coool i like
I love gorey..and you do it so well..if it is fantasy well conjured up...and if your reality move to a bungalow |
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Re: Push and Break
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:34:07 PM AEST
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Indeed quite gory, I like it. Hope all is well over there and this didn't really happen. Parents and people in general can be like that. Hope you're okay.
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Re: Push and Break
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by nintool3369 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:28:11 AM AEST
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| yea i suppose it's rather gory...more so a tragedy too....hey read some of my poetry....if you want some more intense gore.......... |
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