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Walk Alone
Contributed by
Blue
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Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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they're gonna destroy the roads i walk on
all the places i used to love
for moments of complacency
they're gonna destroy where we once went
you used to walk beside me
now i only walk alone
in the rubble of the buildings
where once i had my fun
the children used to come here
to release their fears and anger
but the place is empty
i stare in through the window
turn and head for home
i'm all alone
scuffing my feet in their leather boots
and being called a freak
by kids in nice cars
there used to be so much laughter here
the best times of my life
but now it's dead and gone
and i walk down an empty street alone
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Blue
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2002-11-11 09:00:00]
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Re: Walk Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 10:06:55 AM AEST
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It's really sad when
you go back to a place where
you spent alot of time and had
some of the best times in your
life at, all just to find out how
much it's changed, and how
nothing is the same, this gave
a good visual image, i really
enjoyed reading this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Walk Alone
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by Knowledge on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 10:14:24 AM AEST
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Wow....talk about making people cry...
You almost did that to me. Ya know, I've been to places like that. Places where I used to play when I was young, only to find that they've been changed. That was a good one.
Thanks for the stroll down memory lane.
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