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Blood
Contributed by
xRotten_Insidex
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:15:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Blood makes me grin menacingly
When seen or spoken of I lick my lips with delight
Never cringing at the sight
Taste so coldd so sweet
Once it ran through my veins, Now I feast on it
Im a monster... Look what you've made me become
The innocents blood, so warm so sweet
My blood was once like that.
Till you tainted my soul with your dark curse...
I bathe in blood from god's creation
It tastes so sweet yet poisons my heart
Everythings being taken away the more I change
Im a monster soon to have my neck in a nuse
Until then I will feast
Emotions ripped away as the crimson red drops onto my tongue
Copyright ©
xRotten_Insidex
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2004-09-26 13:15:55]
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Re: Blood
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:24:59 PM AEST
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Crikey this is black..quite liked it though makes me feel like you may be a serial killer tho...joke....err I think
TY Kell x
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Re: Blood
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:45:49 PM AEST
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Wow, very dark. love it :)
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Blood
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by apcfan on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:31:51 PM AEST
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KICK A$$
AWESOME WRITE. I LOVE IT |
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Re: Blood
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:36:43 PM AEST
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| Very awesome |
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Re: Blood
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by nintool3369 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:30:22 AM AEST
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| good ***** man! hey give some of my stuff a read sometime !? |
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