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Contributed by
EternitysLyre
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I found myself.
(A little puddle of the moon, last night)
A pensive pool of little lunar dreams
A pond of wishes dyed black and blue
—‘Cause shadows stole the light right out of lampposts
Odd thing was, it wasn’t raining…
A shrinking sigh
Struck the stars from my eyes
—all those tiny twinkles crashing out of twin skies—
While the moon, trapped, was dying
An icy snow-blanket before fall
Because it couldn't
While the winds were waiting—
Waiting, waiting,
For sleep to blow it all away.
Copyright ©
EternitysLyre
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2004-09-26 13:09:33]
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Re: Empty
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by pixie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:12:29 PM AEST
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wow an amazing write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Empty
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:21:09 PM AEST
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This is... exactly, completely, totally the kind of poetry I enjoy most. Awesome write. For some reason... I'm rather sure that any additional comment from me just would not do this justice.
So, I leave it at that and hope you understand that there is much behind those few words,
SNM |
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Re: Empty
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:26:14 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write keep it up!!!!! |
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Re: Empty
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:54:57 AM AEST
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Great write!
You really have a lot of talent- your poems are what real poetry's all about.
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