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Whisper
Contributed by
macmcgovern
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:05:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Upon her lips
a whisper
Not audible
Known only by the
twitch of muscle
An expression of her passion
returning from another place
An infrequent visitor
Extraordinary excitement
Prospects growing
A planned return
When upon her lips
again, a whisper
Mac
Feb 2004
Copyright ©
macmcgovern
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2004-09-26 13:05:24]
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Re: Whisper
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by pixie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:08:42 PM AEST
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a lovely write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Whisper
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:12:32 PM AEST
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| hmmmm? |
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Re: Whisper
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:50:46 AM AEST
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Oh! Mac --- I LIKE this!
I've never been good at being concise.... I envy you for this. You've managed to pack an awful lot into a few words.
Well done.... Please keep posting!
SNM |
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