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As The Demons Feed
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:56:06 AM in AEST
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As the demons continue to feed,
My soul profusely bleeds,
My eyes no longer carry colour,
As the demons hate becomes fuller.
They always wait around for me to fall,
Tower over me like a big, black wall,
Hissing & spitting in my face,
Taking me to a very scary place.
One from which I can never escape,
So forever my sanity will suffer rape,
All I’ll hear will be screams of the damned,
Against their dungeon walls I will be slammed.
Never again will I see the light of the day,
Now I know I have truly lost my way,
All I feel is delirious & weak,
My way of survival is looking bleak.
The demons torment me still,
I have once & for all lost my will,
I lay on the ground just skin & bone,
Feeling dead & feeling very alone.
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:59:42 AM AEST
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This is brilliant and in its own way a beautiful write. Great work here
Take care
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:02:05 PM AEST
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yeppers, vivid, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:07:59 PM AEST
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Graphic depiction pixie, my dear.
Compelling to the end. Excellent job!
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:33:18 PM AEST
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Hoping the demons won't take you all the way back to before those happy poems...
Beautiful poem, nonetheless.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:08:03 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. |
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by nintool3369 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:32:11 AM AEST
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| good write....yea kinda puts u there with the words n *****.... |
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:57:30 AM AEST
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| Pixie, what a fantastic write. oooooo scary. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:14:59 AM AEST
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Demons are so plentiful, so without scruples or caring...so just ugh. I've dealt with my share. I pray that yours will be overthrown for good.
Stitch |
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Re: As The Demons Feed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th February 2013 @ 11:26:13 PM AEST
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Duh-am! That is scary. This gave me the willies...sounded literally like hell.
And this? ---> So forever my sanity will suffer rape
...what an awesome line!
Thank you for a great read!
Tim |
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