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Expression
Contributed by
Bruce
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:51:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I read an Expression today
that made an Impression on me
The words are very meaningful
as everyone will see
"I don't want someone I can live with
I want someone I can't live without"
If you stop and think a minute
they are not difficult to figure out
The one you love and need
should be the true love of your life
Before you even think about
becoming a husband or wife
Everything you think about
and all the things you do
Should be brought about because
of those three little words, I love you
You could never live without them
if you feel that way
Showing one another constantly
by the things you do and say
Having someone, you can't live without
what more could you ask for
Then to spend the rest of your life
with this person you adore
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-26 09:51:06]
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Re: Expression
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by pixie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:54:34 AM AEST
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a wonderfully, loving sweet and caring write, you have a great heart Bruce,
pixie xx *hugs* |
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Re: Expression
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:43:26 AM AEST
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Hey Bruce. What's up?
This was simply beautiful. And so true too.
You have magic with the pen, my friend.
A great poem is not made solely by beautiful and flowy words, but by the emotion and feelings it evokes.
You have accomplished more than that with this piece. Well done! |
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Re: Expression
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:58:11 AM AEST
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Loving sweet and lovely poem
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Expression
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:17:42 PM AEST
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| love yourself first..then extend yourself to others. It's no use trying otherwise. |
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Re: Expression
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by shelby on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:14:42 PM AEST
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another lovely write and words so true
Michelle |
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