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Looking Out
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:41:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking out of the bedroom window,
Watching life drift to & fro,
Wondering things like how & why?
I wonder what makes other people cry.
Lots of thoughts dance though my mind,
Searching for answers I’ve yet to find,
The lights on the street softly flicker,
Thoughts are emerging now faster & thicker.
Staring into the quiet sky at night,
Watching car headlights burning bright,
Smiling to yourself as you watch the world,
Watching & witnessing how things do unfurl.
As I stand here watching through the glass,
It’s amazing how much time can pass,
I’m lost in a daze from watching for so long,
Watching this world into which I belong.
People walk by of all types of ages,
All their lives at very different stages,
Some still have youth & some are quite old,
Some do share love & some do feel the cold.
I sigh to myself as I let time float past my face,
It’s as if someone has slowed down the rat race,
A car pulls up I’ve been waiting for him for awhile,
My love has returned in my heart I wear a smile.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-26 08:41:38]
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Re: Looking Out
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:45:55 AM AEST
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Holy Wow..Pixie this poem actually rocks...I loved the way everyword flowed and the way the story unfolds...to the loveingly conclusion...awesome images..just totally way cool poem..definatly a 5 from me.
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Re: Looking Out
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by RhythmBndt on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:52:56 AM AEST
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| Very touching :) |
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Re: Looking Out
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:54:59 AM AEST
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| very nice pixie xx |
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Re: Looking Out
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:20:14 AM AEST
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oh pixie this was so amazingly written loved the images. Great job and thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
Brandy |
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Re: Looking Out
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:12:30 PM AEST
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ohhh very well written, great images, thank you for the glimpse into your world, and the ending is so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Looking Out
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:20:50 PM AEST
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Thank you this lifted even my spirits.
Whisper |
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Re: Looking Out
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:29:15 PM AEST
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This felt like a much-needed alone-time. I really liked the way this just seems to lift the weight off one's shoulders in almost complacent contemplation. I really like this one. Maybe we all need to look out the window once in a while.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Looking Out
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:01:49 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem, very nice. |
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Re: Looking Out
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by tifrob on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:22:14 AM AEST
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I liked the slowness and progression of your thought process. It was very natural. Almost like watching a feather floating in the wind. Great job.
J~ |
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