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Arthritus
Contributed by
inoc
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:38:27 AM in AEST
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crippling fingers
tight stiff skin
gee my life
should only begin
oh the pain
of arthritus
I just wish
it was just a virus
rub the lotion
take the pill
that is all there is
but keep working can't be still
maybe a cure
is around the corner
you never know
invented by your daughter!
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inoc
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Re: Arthritus
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:13:10 AM AEST
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Woah Cool poem Inoc, know how ya feel, with all accidents through sports the doc has already said I'll have athritis in a few years, tomany bones broken...well Im hoping he will be wrong myself.
Cheers for the awesome read, A real insight.
Take care |
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Re: Arthritus
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by Lee on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:37:34 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
Verrry unique topic!
Well written combo of free verse and rhymed,
with my favorite line being:
"invented by your daughter!"
Jolly Good Show! |
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Re: Arthritus
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:57:07 AM AEST
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| very cute and i hope for her sake it would happen, she sure would be rich in many ways but most important is all the people she would help/ |
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Re: Arthritus
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:24:20 AM AEST
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I know whatcha mean inoc I have really bad athritis myself and sometimes the pain is so horrible even the pills don't seem to help at times. Great write
Brandy |
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Re: Arthritus
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by tifrob on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:28:02 AM AEST
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I for one would love for the cure to be found today. Great Poem.
J~ |
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