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One more day.
Contributed by
Heartfilledblood
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:41:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish we could spend one more day
In the back of our old house relaxing as the music plays
Everything so pleasent everything so great
As we would kick back together and smoke for the whole day straight
Some may think what we did bad
But just being together was so rad
As I remember more times as we would hike
As these times I was most happy, there was never a spike
I miss you us so
I hope with him everything just flows
A flow that makes you happy
Never to make you crappy
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Heartfilledblood
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2004-09-26 05:41:26]
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Re: One more day.
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:25:51 AM AEST
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| Such a cool pool with a ryming flow even though sad, it was still a write I liked, thanks so much for sharing a memory of yours it was awesome. |
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Re: One more day.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:32:38 AM AEST
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| this is so emotional, very well done |
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Re: One more day.
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:20:29 PM AEST
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*laughs* This was very good. It was different.
I enjoyed your use of words |
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Re: One more day.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 01:24:23 AM AEST
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A masterepice of luv-n-nostaliaga.
Awesome writing!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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