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Never Getting better
Contributed by
Heartfilledblood
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:27:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As the beautiful walk by
He shrivils up and becomes shy
Always remembering of how mean they were
Never forgeting those memories he wishes were just a blur
Every morning he wakes up
As he sees himself he says "whats up"
Seeing an ugly un-deserving person
Hoping his life never to worsen
Keeping himself from society
Never fully trusting anybody
Deep down wishing his life could've been better
Thinking his life never to get better
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Heartfilledblood
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2004-09-26 05:27:01]
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Re: Never Getting better
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:47:40 AM AEST
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Oh such a sad poem.
great stlye.
i love the way it's written.
good job! |
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Re: Never Getting better
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:29:38 AM AEST
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Beautfully composed from the heart, I sometimes look in the mirror and say what if or why me... but sigh and get on with life..Im not looker, and had my fair share of bullies and others to deal, with i overcame, so I am hoping he finds a way to see the beauty within. You have a wonderful way with words,this poem definetly gets a five star, you deserve it.
Take care always. |
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Re: Never Getting better
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:45:19 PM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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