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its happening.....................

Contributed by veenu on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:45:35 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

its something irritating,
iam giving my opinion,
but the bluddy misunderstanding,
stop me to make any clearification.
still i am practising,
but it's happening,
that there's nothing running,
how cunning.
am i hearting her,
how can she think,
i will do something like that to her,
who knows who is hurted,
still i have not protested,
i ever reverted,
i always bow my head,
telling her that iam wrong,
instead.
she never said,
is iam angry with her?
she only told,
she laugh on my prattle,
now i know,
all that glitter is not gold.
my feelings are hurted, they are flooded,
i think i was wrong,
i was strong,
now nothing is known,
now iam weak,
want to creep,
but there is no support,
it was what i got,
no one care,
who dare,
but i only stare.
when i talk to her,
i pronounce something that was not clear,
to whom i may complaint, for what i may complain.
eyes want to rain,
but some one again,
laugh,
i remain.
she told me again,
she can't speak excess,
to whom i may concern what,
she had expressed.
but i have no complaint,
i never mind if me or she is wrong for a short range,
because my love is strange.

Copyright © veenu ... [ 2004-09-26 03:45:35]
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Re: its happening..................... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:54:03 AM AEST
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Very well written, with alot of feeling and confusion, it actually makes the reader see how geneunly hurt you are...
Awesome poem take care.

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