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Most Wild of Dream
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:58:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to die for you
I want nothing more
Than to take one to the chest for you
And see you looking down at me
As I look up at you
As I struggle to breathe
And you finally realize my love for you
That's how much you mean to me
Here I go again
Getting ahead of myself
Before it even begins
Making promises that
I only hope I'll keep
Holding myself to things
You could only find in my most wild of dreams
Like my fist to the wall
My heart breaks for you
What's it about love
That you find so frightning
Holding on to others
Like the sky holds on to lightning
The light up ahead
Is now in your rear-view mirror
That hope that you had
Is becoming less clearer
You're a poet
And you don't even know it
I'd pull up the sun
If you ever felt cold
I'd do so much for you
But you'll never know
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Re: Most Wild of Dream
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:58:55 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem, but why brun yourself up within holding so much love for someone that will never know? Is it not better to find out if it goes to ways, ah well sorry sometimes I babble for what would I know, nice poem of wonder and love hidden. |
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Re: Most Wild of Dream
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by Lee on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:12:34 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
Wonderful write!
You've got my favorite lines in here, too:
"You're a poet,
And didn't even know it."
"Winter time winds blue and freezin'
Comin' from northern storms in the sea
Love has been lost, is that the reason?
Trying desperately to be free"
-The Doors "Wintertime Love"
Well done! |
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Re: Most Wild of Dream
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:25:33 PM AEST
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| great poem,and it will be their lost from walking away from love. |
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