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Control Me
Contributed by
hyperactive_cutie
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Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:15:53 AM in AEST
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You make me fall, You make me trip.
You make me shy, I dont think I can handle all of this.
You make me clumsy, You make me giggle.
You have control over me that I just cant explain.
You can make me do whatever you want without having to say a single word.
I hate it!
But I love it.
So please dont stop...
No one has been able to control me like this.
And no matter how hard I try to fight it, I cant say no.
You make me lone to be close to you, to have your arms wrapped tightly around me, to feel your breath against my neck.
It drives me crazy, because I know I cant, I know I cant be near you....
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Re: Control Me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:26:53 AM AEST
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| Primo write, was cool to see such sensitivity in your poem, cheers for sharing. |
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Re: Control Me
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:50:30 AM AEST
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OOoooooh weee is right. The edges of sensuality so gracefully negotiated. Wow.
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