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A Cry for Help
Contributed by
Adonia_Donata
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 11:52:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Fear is coming,
I hear him breathing.
My heart is pounding,
My chest is heaving.
God above me,
Hear my cry!
Afraid to live,
Don't want to die.
Surround me, guide me,
Help me see,
That You are here,
Soclose to me!
Is there a time,
Is there a place,
Where I can see
Your loving face?
Come to me,
Help me feel,
Hide me from this fear
So real!
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Adonia_Donata
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2004-09-25 23:52:22]
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:17:59 AM AEST
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Cool poems rymes so well, and I am sure your words will reach even him.
Cheers for the read. |
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by alexb on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:01:58 AM AEST
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| great rhymes, good emotion |
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Hihocherio on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:26:24 AM AEST
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It flows and rhyms so well!
All the poems I have read by you are Great!
Keep on writing I'd love to read more! |
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Re: A Cry for Help
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 05:32:51 AM AEST
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Wow Great Write.. This poem rhymed so
well .. great job!! keep up the good work!
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