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Conceived Thru Silhouettes
Contributed by
Lee
on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 10:12:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Deluxe apartments are haunted
Precarious poltergeists
Insects blue in the ice tray
Inner-city country house
A mutant laundry mouse cuts the cheese
With silverware it lifted
From the local department store
On ancient walls, inscribed by mystics scrawls:
As a
Partial entity
Going in
A room, alone
A white
Skyline
Tearing thru
The facade
Until the
Copper gods
Erase the dawn
Copyright ©
Lee
... [
2004-09-25 22:12:03]
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Re: Conceived Thru Silhouettes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:00:49 AM AEST
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| this is awesome |
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Re: Conceived Thru Silhouettes
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:34:26 AM AEST
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| A majorly cool write, with clear mind boggling images. |
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Re: Conceived Thru Silhouettes
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by arden on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:03:32 AM AEST
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this was so cool Lee.
i love your use of words and the flow of it.
A white
Skyline
Tearing thru
The facade
Until the
Copper gods
Erase the dawn
amazing.
beautiful imagery.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: Conceived Thru Silhouettes
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:34:51 PM AEST
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intrigingly excellent write:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Conceived Thru Silhouettes
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:47:02 PM AEST
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| This was good. All I can say is wow. |
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