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Nobody There
Contributed by
Lee
on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A rooster crowing,
Half-past midnight.
A knock at the door.
You look,
But there's nobody there.
I want to know,
The video plea.
What were the executioner's final words?
Before his voice melted,
Distorted, lost like great ships,
Thruout the Bermuda Triangle.
Where will we
Put all of the
Miniatures,
In the mystery cupboard?
Copyright ©
Lee
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2004-09-25 21:57:11]
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Re: Nobody There
(User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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| i liked the begining but i started to get confused after that |
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Re: Nobody There
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:32:00 PM AEST
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hmmm very interesting.
had to read it a few times to fully soak it in.
its a well written poem.
very insightful.
i like
Arden |
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