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Feel Me
Contributed by
Opium
on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am sin, I am hate
I get in and penetrate
Deep into your soul indulging your heart
Possessing your mind, tearing it apart
Your life I'll take and make it mine
In fear you'll shake, shivers down your spine
Evil duty, by your name
Getting obscurity, getting fame
Thank me afterward, disgraceful one
Truth you heard, my work is done
To life you'll look in a different view
My hand you took, once you knew
This path I lead until the end
My work, my deed is to offend
I am the dark side of everyone's soul
I deffend your pride, but play My role
My seeds are planted inside your brain
And hate is granted for you to gain.
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2002-11-11 01:00:00]
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Re: Feel Me
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 03:16:19 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, i enjoyed
reading this one, Thanks for
sharing it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Feel Me
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by Vampy on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:39:49 AM AEST
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| Ahh... this was an excellent write, I like it. What you say is true, hate really does live inside all of our hearts. |
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Re: Feel Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 07:07:12 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this peice,great poetry! christina |
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Re: Feel Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 02:06:28 PM AEST
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I LIKE IT!
joelle |
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Re: Feel Me
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 09:48:38 PM AEST
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Hi Opium,
this is a very good write,
keep writing you are bless.
keep hate away from your heart. |
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