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*Your* *Precious* *Gift*
Contributed by
inoc
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:50:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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If I could choose a gift for you
anything ...
I'd choose a gorgeous star
the brightest sparkliest one at that
I'd give it to you wrapped in a rainbow
I'd place it in a famous blow hole
with fluffy clouds too keep it safe
I'd build a bridge over it
structured of solid gold and precious pearls
diamonds would sparkle on the edges
consisting spectacular shining moonlight
I'd make a path out of the prettiest shells
with a garden bed of pleasant smelling flowers
veering around your magical gift
soft leaves half cover it
belonging from the awsome oak tree
the sun would be luxurious
not too hot
just perfect
I wait patiently
as the wind softly blows
that cool breeze
will keep your gift safe
forever until
I can finally give it to you
in the precious moment of peace
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-25 19:50:15]
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Re: *Your* *Precious* *Gift*
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:00:11 PM AEST
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| What a beautifully written poem. I liked this write. It definately gets 5 stars. Thank you for your prayers and wishes for my grandmother and my family. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: *Your* *Precious* *Gift*
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by Lee on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:21:27 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
A charming piece of poetry!
Did someone say mOOnlight?
Well, OOHHkay:
"Let's swim to the moon, uh huh
Let's climb through the tide
Penetrate the evenin' that the
City sleeps to hide Let's swim out tonight, love
It's our turn to try
Parked beside the ocean
On our moonlight drive
Let's swim to the moon, uh huh
Let's climb through the tide
Surrender to the waiting worlds
That lap against our side
Nothin' left open
And no time to decide
We've stepped into a river
On our moonlight drive...
Easy, I love you
As I watch you glide
Falling through wet forests
On our moonlight drive, baby
Moonlight drive
Come on, baby, gonna take a little ride
Down, down by the ocean side
Gonna get real close
Get real tight
Baby gonna drown tonight
Goin' down, down, down
Down, down, down, down, down ,down
Deep below
Children of the caves
Will let their secret fires glow"
-The Doors "Moonlight Drive"
You have a definite talent for poetry.
Well done!
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Re: *Your* *Precious* *Gift*
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:21:29 AM AEST
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| another beuty |
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