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Corners of Circular Rooms
Contributed by
Rissa
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:11:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Cut out the heart to save the brain
Bring in the hurt to numb the pain
Lock me up to keep me sane
Or just kill me off right now.
Hide in corners of circular rooms
To keep the monsters from finding you
Locked inside and shelved too high
Reasoned too far to leave.
Tears burn in veins to take up space
Can't fill out that empty place
Colors fade to black and grey
'cause, y'know, no one else could live this way.
And when they could help is when they're not around
And when screams could break the silence no one's there to make a sound
And when touch would feel warm and a welcome invite
No one cares enough to make everything alright.
Cut out the heart to save the brain
Bring in the hurt to numb the pain
Lock me up to keep me sane
...or just kill me off right now.
Copyright ©
Rissa
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2004-09-25 16:11:20]
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Re: Corners of Circular Rooms
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:56:05 PM AEST
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| Well, hun, I'd say ya did pretty well! I really LOVED your poem. I loved the visions it created. I hope you start feeling better, though. Great poem! :-) If you're ever lonely, you can talk to me! I'm all ears. |
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Re: Corners of Circular Rooms
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:52:36 PM AEST
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i think you did a wonderful job in putting your feelings into this one.. so much pain but i really enjoyed reading it.. you are truly talented and your words seem to go nicely together.. i hope your dread comes to an end
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