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Already Dead
Contributed by
matts_sweetie_04
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hide under my bed clutching my teddy bear for dear life.
From down the hall I hear my daddy hitting my mommy, his precious wife.
I shiver as I hear daddy's footsteps outside the doorway.
I know he is mad and that I will be the one to pay.
Daddy throws open the door and spots me under the bed.
He grabs me by the hair, it feels as though he is literally trying to pull it out my head.
He throws me against the wall, slaps me across the face then stares as blood trickles down my cheek.
I try to stand but fall from being so weak.
Daddy lunges at me not caring he has hurt me badly.
Mommy looks from across the room sadly.
I cry for her as I try to protect myself.
Daddy grabs me and bangs my head against a shelf.
Mommy cries for him to stop as he continues to bang my head.
It does not matter though for I am already dead.
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Re: Already Dead
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by PsykoticDoll on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:27:57 PM AEST
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| Well written, I really liked it. |
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Re: Already Dead
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:06:02 PM AEST
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| well written, excellent, rhymed, and very powerful write. |
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Re: Already Dead
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:31:47 PM AEST
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| very powerful. captured feelings I had as I watched my son being abused..I tried to stop it and it got worse..so I learned..or thought I learned to be still..so it would pass quickly by. When I interfered (sp?) It worsened..back then the police didn't do much but come out and talk..it wasn't like now. You captured the sitting there and the sad look..you might throw in a knot in the stomach..or a sick feeling... |
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Re: Already Dead
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:29:14 AM AEST
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| capturing and powerful write! |
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