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say goodbye to the darkness
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:18:54 PM in AEST
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i have washed my hands of my sweet tears,
i have said goodbye,farewell to pain and fears,
good ridance to the exicutioners song,
nothings too horrible nothings wrong,
everythings good when you feel understood,
not everyone wants to not everyone should,
some people dont know the difference between bad and good,
i dont crave from my grave to see the reepers hood,
i dont have to cut myself bleeding for you to ask what im needing,
i am loved,by at least god up above,
thank you for helping me fight,for bringing my problems into sight,
for warming me in the darkest times of the night,
i remember the pain, but i dont let it remain ,
simply because it drives me insane,
i havent the room for stress just the same,
im done with the head games,im done with the lies,im done with the endless cries,
over broken ties,
nothing dies in a battle of one,you leave your self shattered,
bruised and battered,your ashes never scattered,
you will never find peace untill you let go find your release.
Copyright ©
blackholesun
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2004-09-25 12:18:54]
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Re: say goodbye to the darkness
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by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:21:10 PM AEST
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| i love this poem...it leads to optimistic thoughts which is something i always need...keep expressing your talent. |
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Re: say goodbye to the darkness
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:30:30 PM AEST
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This was a great poem, very emotional and it lead to an ispirationaly outro, if you will. Vey good
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Re: say goodbye to the darkness
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:30:44 PM AEST
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this is really good.. i love the way you've used rhyme in this..
one suggestion though, use a spellcheck or something before you post :) otherwise it's perfect.
keep it up
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: say goodbye to the darkness
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by SwordsmanKaz on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 08:15:21 PM AEST
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i liked this a lot
so nice, also some other like If find me please kill me also good! but this one is better! |
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