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A Sleepless Night
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:54:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I sat there by the computer
thinking of what to write
Having spent many restless hours
in a totally Sleepless Night
She was on my mind constantly
in every thought I had
This wonderful, beautiful lady
I was never feeling sad
How do I get her the message
what are the words I say
How do I show her I love her
in every possible way
To many Sleepless Nights
it is always on my mind
Loving someone like this
the proper way I must find
I know she knows how I feel
it is quite evident in what she sees
It would surely not be possible
to hide any feelings like these
Some day soon, maybe
the opportunity will come about
Putting and end to Sleepless Nights
of this there would be no doubt
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-25 00:54:53] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 01:00:37 AM AEST (User
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Good work.
Jus tell her.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 05:27:47 AM AEST (User
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another beautiful poem Bruce I hope you sleep well soon sucks walking round like a zombie lol have a nice day
Michelle |
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 06:23:41 AM AEST (User
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I am sure you will find a way to tell her.
Sleepless nights had a few of these in the past.
Wonderful poem Bruce
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 06:56:00 AM AEST (User
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Awesome poem, written well for someone that is running on empty, I hope you find dreams sweet solace soon, take care always |
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Overstated on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:20:21 AM AEST (User
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i liked this poem a lot bruce - had some lovely words in it - suffering can sometimes bring out the best in us |
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by inoc on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:41:31 AM AEST (User
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your poem is a 5 star again!!!!!
the love for her is felt[ like your heart beating through each word. you wrote]...
I agree with emy...tell her.....
if not with your voice...with one or more of your beautiful poems!
cheers! |
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:14:55 PM AEST (User
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awwww, very sweet loving poem, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: A Sleepless Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by free2you on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:38:38 PM AEST (User
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Putting and end to Sleepless Nights
putting an end? My keyboard is loose too..drives me nuts!!! In love that desperately are you? Poor you. Must suck to be you. Man hater that I am..ha ha ha!!!
just...almost joking....not quite heartless...don't want anyone to feel the pain I do..especially a man..most likely stick his head in the nearest oven! I've got to stop this...Someone Help me!!! |
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