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Out In The Woods
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sittin by the river
feet in the water
starin into heavin
lettin my mind wonder
i feel the mud between my toes
and let the wind comb my hair
it keeps gettin darker
and theres trees everwhere
i feel like someones wachin
just waitin back there
i get up and start walkin
faster and faster
runnin through the woods
but hes much faster
a stong arm grasp
a loud exploisive noise
the pain in my side
gettin stonger and stronger
down in the dirt
with blood everywhere
the tast of salty tears
run across my face
hes sittin on my back
with the gun to my head
i hear one more loud nosie
know all i see is black
thats it im dead
but why was i attacted
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2004-09-24 23:57:32]
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Re: Out In The Woods
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by Lee on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:11:39 AM AEST
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel says:
You've got a distinct poetic voice.
Well done! |
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Re: Out In The Woods
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by Lips on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:18:34 PM AEST
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| Whoa nice .. that was well written ! |
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