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Rain
Contributed by
Cenon
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:26:56 PM in AEST
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Rain here, rain there,
do you see rain it's everywhere!
Puddles here, puddles there,
do you see puddles they're everywhere!
Cocoa steaming, blankets on me,
Steaming cocoa thats what i drink with marshmellows!
Rain!
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2004-09-24 22:26:56]
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Re: Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:28:59 PM AEST
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| you had brilliance even in 2nd grade, very nice. i think the last "rain!" is a bit unnecessary though. |
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Re: Rain
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:34:07 PM AEST
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| Lol cool write, had a tender gentleness to the overall flow, thanks for sharing such talent. |
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Re: Rain
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:55:09 PM AEST
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Very cute especially at such young age.
Luv it.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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