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In the Wind
Contributed by
Cenon
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:20:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A very cold night,
The howling wind rustling grass;
You stand there alone.
Copyright ©
Cenon
... [
2004-09-24 22:20:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In the Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lee on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:25:26 PM AEST (User
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel says:
This is a gem!
I too write unusual haiku!
Well done! |
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Re: In the Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:25:49 PM AEST (User
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very nice. i always love haikus that actually follow the format. |
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Re: In the Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:35:28 PM AEST (User
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Quick and to the point awesome write. |
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Re: In the Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:58:36 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done. :) |
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