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Realization
Contributed by
Srugglingyoungster
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:05:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How'd it get this bad?
How'd i fall so far?
Why is everyone
Suddenly mad at me?
Friends becoming distant,
Enemies wanting to fight.
My anger surfacing,
Crying out into the dark night.
If i could,
I'd take a knife right now
And put it to my throat,
Slitting it and taking away this pain.
My tears flow freshand salty,
more and more by the second.
No place to run,
I'm suddenly trapped in a corner.
Copyright ©
Srugglingyoungster
... [
2004-09-24 22:05:57]
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Re: Realization
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:13:04 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very emotional and powerful. |
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Re: Realization
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:14:06 PM AEST
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very good, but towards the end it starts getting intense, and you end it...I think you should add more to it...just a small suggestion...other wise its great and I'm kinda goin throught the same thing...
please comment on my work too
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Re: Realization
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:04:39 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Hang tuff this too soon shall pass.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
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