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Tears in My Eyes
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:57:52 PM in AEST
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Tears in My Eyes
I look back and see
All the memories
So self concious
Of what was thought of me
Unsure of myself constantly
And it got me nowhere
Except here
And here I am in nowhere
Still with this fear
I wonder now
If what I did
Was for the best
Way back then
I still hate the way
People affect me
I can never let go
When I'm supposed to
Prolonging the pain
That kills me inside
Till I can't hold on
And I let go
With tears in my eyes
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:11:22 PM AEST
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wow...incredible...!
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by Nicole_Rahaman on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:33:26 PM AEST
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Very moving. Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:55:41 PM AEST
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A beautiful yet emotional write, and so painful to read, like i was there seeing akll the hurt you are feeling, I hope you find the solace needed to heal the pain and anguish you feel within your heart.
Take care always and forever
Karl |
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by inoc on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:56:05 AM AEST
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a well written poem
thanks for submitting
can feel the pain
cheers! |
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:27:42 PM AEST
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| like i've always said you have to seek comfort and peace within yourself and dissasociate yourself from those that only bring you down. you're you and there's nothing else you can do but be true to yourself. this was an awesome poem tho and i hope that your days look up. you have great talent! |
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:10:25 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem. |
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by Archie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:59:38 AM AEST
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| This is a very true and honest poem. You have shared your heart well. Things get better when we see them in perspective |
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:35:17 PM AEST
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Another power packed write.
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Re: Tears in My Eyes
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:46:45 PM AEST
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| This write has a lot of honesty to it. I can't let go of the past either. It's hurtful. I share your pain. I hope things look up for you. *S* Cynthia |
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