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Have You Ever Felt?
Contributed by
luna_mica
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:04:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Have you ever felt...
Like life isn't worth the pain?
Have you ever felt...
Like your soul has a dark stain?
Have you ever felt...
Your life ebb and wane?
Have you ever felt...
That you are no longer sane?
Have you ever felt...
Like you would like nothing better than to die?
Have you ever felt...
Like you can not anymore force yourself to cry?
Have you ever felt...
Like you can't deal with, can't live with, all the lies?
Have you ever felt...
Like killing yourself without so much as a goodbye?
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Re: Have You Ever Felt?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Katie2008 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:22:52 PM AEST (User
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You're very talented. You express your feelings so well. I can relate to this. Nice work.
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Re: Have You Ever Felt?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:24:46 PM AEST (User
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sure have. |
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Re: Have You Ever Felt?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:17:21 PM AEST (User
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Have felt have done, have failed and now the past is my prison never to be undone.
Cool poem with some intersting questions, that many always ask yet not all find the answer they seek. |
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