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SMILES
Contributed by
dmartel15
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:49:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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A smile gleaming from your face
brings joy to my heart
begging to see you smile
hoping never to be far apart
Brings joy to my heart
just like the very thought of you
hoping never to be far apart
needing you beside me
Just the very thought of you
feeling your warmth inside me
needing you beside me
breathing your beautiful breathes
Feeling your warmth inside me
begging to see you smile
breathing your beautiful breathes
A smile gleaming from your face
Makes my world a better place
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dmartel15
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2004-09-24 20:49:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: SMILES
(User Rating: 1 ) by positivelypurple on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:58:35 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful dedication! Very sweet and well-written. |
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Re: SMILES
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoeticMystery on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:39:31 PM AEST (User
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Very Very Sweet! I hope someone writes for me some day! |
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Re: SMILES
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:39:46 PM AEST (User
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this was really touching and i know how you feel...although roles slightly reversed lol. the imagery was awesome...take care |
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