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Bleeding Inside
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:08:09 PM in AEST
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Bleeding Inside
I always hide
What I feel inside
Killing me till I die
The pain that won't subside
Denying the light
Forgetting about life
Suffering in misery
Till I die
The pain never leaves
Me inside
Consuming me till I bleed
And confide
To the nothingness
That surrounds me
Constantly in life
I let the worse part of me
Consume me till I bleed
While I'm dying on the inside
From the pain that won't subside
All because I couldn't handle life
And these scars pay the price
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Re: Bleeding Inside
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:35:16 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write. I can relate. I hope you're okay. Nice work.
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Re: Bleeding Inside
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:40:17 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
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Re: Bleeding Inside
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:15:52 PM AEST
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i relate to this very much...I hold in so many things...it seriously kills you inside...great job
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Re: Bleeding Inside
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:12:11 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to this one. It hurts so bad. Great write. |
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Re: Bleeding Inside
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:07:28 PM AEST
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| I hope everything goes well with you. Hang in there. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Bleeding Inside
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:27:01 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem very much and you expressed it so well with your words, keep up the great postings |
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Re: Bleeding Inside
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:29:33 PM AEST
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| wunderbar ^_^ |
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