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Discriminating Mask
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:10:43 PM in AEST
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The needle popped through his thick flesh
Droplets of sullen blood trickled down his cheeks
Thick, brown leather straps are being sewn onto his face
If you segregate inhumanly, you will be punished on hellish terms
Those lined up shall be blinded by boiling mercury
Their retinas scarred by their malicious judgment
Blinded in hell you will be,
Forever running around on scorching fire
As the mercury is poured,
Shrill banshee-like screams reverberate off the walls,
Emitting from foul mouths
I look in disgust & shame,
As creations of life are being lost to this rightful punishment
Those who shun people of different race, color or gender
Are in my own hell
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-09-24 19:10:43]
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Re: Discriminating Mask
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:33:52 PM AEST
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| angry and intriguing write. |
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Re: Discriminating Mask
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:38:56 PM AEST
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This is amazing. It was the most angry poem I have read for a long time. I don't think there is any room for discrimination, I'm so tired of people being seperated from "normal" people because of gender, race, disorders, or whatever. I really like your poem.
Katie |
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Re: Discriminating Mask
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:32:38 PM AEST
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| Freaky and graphic wirte, like it though reminded me of myself when anger is showing thorugh, cheers for sharing such a vivid talent. |
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