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YOU
Contributed by
inoc
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:06:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I take in
your every word
looking up to you
I respect your awsome courage
you are a figure
that I want to copy
as to me
you do no wrong
your speech is clear
your beauty is out of reach
no one can compare
yet your words
show us how to be
like You
we can if we obey
those words
thank You for Your image
I can't wait
to be exactly like You
being so strong
in every way
so today I will pray
that my life
will be an image
of how you want my
life to be
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-24 18:06:42]
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Re: YOU
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by x_midnight_x on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:08:26 PM AEST
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nice write...its got a hidden sadness to it i feel,
blessings:)
midnight x |
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Re: YOU
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:16:39 PM AEST
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Great poem.
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Re: YOU
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:48:41 PM AEST
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| great write. ill leave out my opinion on the concept on this one though. |
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Re: YOU
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:52:07 AM AEST
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good solid poetry.
wildejohnny. |
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