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[Nameless]
Contributed by
Kione
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:49:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love, death, depression, which is the strongest for me? I haven't a clue. Do you? If you do please let me in on your secret. Other than a few things, a few people, I care about nothing in this world. And don't believe I ever will.
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Kione
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2004-09-24 17:49:10]
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Re: [Nameless]
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by Kione on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:19:05 AM AEST
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| Errrrrrrr....Bumpish? |
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Re: [Nameless]
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by shadowsofmyheart on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:44:27 PM AEST
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| short but not so sweet. try a real poetry form, one line after another, and mabey a rhyeme to tie it ogether. a little to veage |
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Re: [Nameless]
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 03:50:24 PM AEST
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You have good ideas ,but try more ryming. keep writting you will improve.
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