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Love is confusing...
Contributed by
Roshie
on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Even though you are a stranger,
I'm always looking your way.
I didn't really understand it,
but then I realised one day.
I've fallen in love with you,
And it's hard to think of why.
I think it was that day,
You looked me in the eye.
I worked up all my courage,
To ask you for your name.
And when you gave it to me,
I was very glad I came.
You asked me for my number,
And to my surprise.
I wrote it down for you,
While you stared into my eyes.
I wanted you to call me,
Though I didn't think you would.
So I stared at your number,
And wondered if I should.
The phone rang very loudly,
And my heart skipped a beat.
I found myself picking up the phone,
While jumping to my feet.
We talked and talked for hours,
But then you had to go.
You said "tomorrow at 6 o'clock,
And I just couldn't say no.
I saw you waiting for me.
So I walked right up to you.
I laughed and smiled while we where together,
I'm glad you did that too.
You leaned right in to kiss me,
I know I leaned in too.
But then I was walking away,
Confused, because of my love for you.
Now we do not even speak,
And I don't know what to do.
But I know deep in my heart,
I'm still in love with you.
Copyright ©
Roshie
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2002-11-10 16:00:00]
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Re: Love is confusing...
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by OreO on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 04:15:40 PM AEST
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Absolutely Beautiful
I really enjoyed this!!
Keep em' coming and
Welcome to YPDC
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Re: Love is confusing...
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 06:29:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Very touching. I myself have been in a situation like this.
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Re: Love is confusing...
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by Opium on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:56:13 PM AEST
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You really described the situation very well! I liked this poem alot!
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Re: Love is confusing...
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by Dot on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 11:48:08 PM AEST
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| Roshie, I just read this poem. A lovely verse. Has your situation changed? Dot |
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Re: Love is confusing...
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:14:19 AM AEST
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yes i agree love
can be confusing
sometimes ciao
for now good poem. |
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