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What's going on??
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 02:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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What's going on?
Everything's destroyed
Family
Friends
And even relationships
All gone...
In the midst of one night
It all seemed to slowly part its way
By morning the sun never rose
A shadow had crept its way across the land
Sucking the youth from all living beings
Dying of age
Lonely and unspoken for...
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
... [
2004-09-24 14:14:04]
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Re: What's going on??
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by Lionel on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 03:53:21 PM AEST
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| Indeed - What's going on? Very depressing. - End of the world? Oh, end of your world. Begin another. God Bless |
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Re: What's going on??
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:57:44 PM AEST
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| powerful. |
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Re: What's going on??
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 02:58:32 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: What's going on??
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by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:47:21 PM AEST
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| short but to the point...it's overwhelming how fast life changes...sorry for your losses and your pain i hope your days have looked better. |
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