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Alone
Contributed by
Vigilante006
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We sat there in silence
As I held you in my arms
The tears rolled down your cheeks
And your body shook with sobs
With each new trembling breath
I wished the pain could be mine instead
I didn't know what to say
So I gave you my shoulder to cry
I hated what he'd done to you
And longed to make it right
I held you until the tears had gone
Til I saw the sunshine of your smile
I held you close another time
And your smile told me all was well
Now all that is gone again
He's holding you this time
And I am left to wonder why
Once more I'm left alone
Copyright ©
Vigilante006
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2004-09-24 13:55:26]
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Re: Alone
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 03:33:16 PM AEST
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| This poem is awesome!!! I really enjoyed it. It's very well written, and someone I know is having that problem right now, so i'm going to share this poem with him. ttyl, Ashlee aka VonDutchChick08 |
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Re: Alone
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by willow_tara72002 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:52:01 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem... I relate to this because i know what its like to do anythign for someone you care about,. but. in the end,. they will never like you back,. and your always alone,. |
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Re: Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:00:38 PM AEST
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| ...no one ever said people were smart. |
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