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the night before hallows eve
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:56:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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twisted evil i n his skin crawling deep,
his soul rotts within,
he is capeable of the greatest sin,
if you meet him don't invite him in,
he will defeat you,probably eat you,
and spill your inards to the side ,
when he tan's himself a hide,rips skin from your back!,
you will realize there is no turning back,
he is the butcher,so he does hack,
slashing and gashing all through the night,
waiting till the moon is right,
squeezing the veins ,
your dead remains he feast,
hidden in the darkness the most horrible beast,
he lives forever,off the souls of the disseased,
he craves`a nasty slaughter,
on witch it feeds,
he isnt even a man,a demon of power,
born to the witching hour,
his romance is sower,to the touch,
if you get this close ,you dont know that much,
he is in every dark closet,
under every bed,
he turns into the creature that wemost dread,
the horrific thoughts caught in our heads,
lhe will come to you in the night,
when you are sound asleep you can not fight,
and if you did swing back he wouldnt cut you some slack,
with his chainsaw he would hack!
your legs from your waist,
your chest from your back,
dont say his name dont you dare!after all he is eveywhere,
i can tell you but dont say it out loud;
he is not humble and proud,
his name is mad reeper,
he is a soul keeper!
he needs us to live,
we have formed a plan on how many souls to give,
so we all dont have to die,
dont cry but he is coming for you good bye!
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:14:41 PM AEST
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Awesome and chilly write blackholesun, this one sent shivers down my spine, the only thing I found hard was the spelling, take more time on the poem and a pure master piece of dread will there be.
All in all an excellent write, will have to check around to make sure no-one is hiding within the shadows waiting for my snores. |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:17:10 PM AEST
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gr8 poem creepy!
i need my blanky tonite!
love han xx |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by Lee on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:17:51 PM AEST
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Imaginative little horror yarn
Says moviepoet critic
The Surreal eeL y'know Feel.
Reminds me of the Ramones' "Chainsaw"
without the love song element.
Well done! |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by Lee on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:20:11 PM AEST
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Also I like the title.
Reminds me of one of my favorite C-D's,
AFI "All Hallow's E.P." |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by pixie on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 12:22:06 PM AEST
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oohh a very chilling and grim write, well written
pixie xx |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by willow_tara72002 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:10:38 PM AEST
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I loved how dark this was, Amazaing write.
I cant put into words how much i liked this one |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:28:36 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by veenu on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 01:10:27 AM AEST
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what can i say about ur poem....................................but want to say about poem every line of poem show a whole essat within................
very nice little scary can say much scarry...........
keep composing........
if u can't compose u r a rose,
but without order................
how is the quote ................................u cant find it in any book or site
lover of poem
naveen.........or veenu |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:35:06 AM AEST
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hey nice one brittany.
VeRy SpOoKy!!!
wOoO |
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Re: the night before hallows eve
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by hate on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 03:14:56 PM AEST
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| nice peom. I really like it |
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