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I thought wrong...
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:58:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I thought he really liked me,
His eyes ‘most told me so,
My senses were mislead,
For I feel that way no more
The first time I looked eye to eye,
He was the first, who’d ever smiled,
I’d sworn he’d turned a little pink,
But, looks like he was just being kind
He spoke at times, and I spoke back,
We shared a few words, not more,
He quivered slightly as he said my name,
I thought he liked me so
We’d met only the day before today,
And now I feel like such a fool,
His name was which I spoke of so rare,
But, now I feel like a stagnant Cesspool
I thought he really liked me,
His eyes ‘most told me so,
My senses turned from wrong to right,
‘twas benevolence, nothing more...
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-09-24 09:58:57]
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Re: I thought wrong...
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:14:29 AM AEST
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| A really sad write, it sucks when hope is shattered so brutely, I feel for your pain and heartbreak, this is an awesome write, and it showed such strength in writting about a painful memory. thanks for sharing and I hope you find your true love |
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Re: I thought wrong...
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:30:57 PM AEST
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| assumptions never got anyone anywhere. |
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Re: I thought wrong...
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:49:09 PM AEST
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| A sad write, but good. |
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