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A Doze In Pantyhose
Contributed by
inoc
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:32:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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tick tock tick tock
alarm sounds the clock
swish swash swish swash
perfumed soap to wash
scub rub scrub rub
careful film on tub
shy lie shy lie
the fastest way to dry
stressed blessed stressed blessed
yesterdays clothes to dress
yum nyum yum nyum
dry toast on the run
gulp slirp gulp slirp
cold coffee from the perk
clip clop clip clop
shoving heels on so hop
click pick click pick
keys shaking grind that stick
roar soar roar soar
the foot hits the floor
weave heave weave heave
the corners sharp causing car to leave
toll roll toll roll
the cars out of control
bang crash bang crash
into a tree instant smash
fuz buz fuz buz
still okay Suz?
nod rod nod rod
hey gee what a sod
doze rose doze rose
jump up in panty hose
neat feet neat feet
oh no...asleep on the labortory seat
mush hush mush hush
late for work now must rush
see hee see hee
please don't tell thee
lace trace lace trace
workmates yet I face!!!!!
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-24 07:32:02]
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Re: A Doze In Pantyhose
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:00:22 AM AEST
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Woah Inoc, I got a little tongue tied reading this poem, no insult intended though lol, you sure got some skills to write a poem so interesting, I thoughourly enjoyed reading the poem, made my brain work, thank you ofr that I was starting to feel tired.
You are wonder with the way you put words into something wiht rythm flow and how can hold it till the end of the poem, really cool.
Take care Inoc and thanks for sharing |
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Re: A Doze In Pantyhose
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:22:33 PM AEST
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soooo cute... so much to do, so little time...great poem.
mary :-*) |
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Re: A Doze In Pantyhose
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:52:20 AM AEST
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| Very good, expressive ryme. I've read a number of your poems; this is my favorite, so far. |
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