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fall

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 06:14:45 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I'm falling and I want to fall

I want to fall at your feet
Beneath the ground and into your arms
Entwine your arms around me, through me
Fill me up with you and your presence

I'm falling and - - -


I want to fall faster than I know how
Faster than I am, faster than I can

At times with my head on your shoulder
My body pressed against yours
I feel I could almost fall
And I might cry, okay?
All I can do is hang limply there and be near you

I want to be near you
Nearer than known by anyone anywhere ever
I want to fall into you and be in you
In the depths of you, all the way

I want to fall amidst your mind and your dreams
I want to fall against your strong embrace
I want to fall among your tender heart

And I want you to fall too, I think
And pierce my heart more powerfully than ever

And I'm falling
And I want to fall
And it's not enough that I'm falling
I want to fall and I want to have fallen

And it might be too quick for you but I'm still falling
I'm falling and I want to fall and be fallen

And never let go




Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-09-24 06:14:45]
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Re: fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:12:38 AM AEST
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This is passionate and raw love without holding back...
I like it...
Hur


Re: fall (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:21:40 AM AEST
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Awww, *hugs you*
This is sweet, and beautiful.
Carry on falling hunni.
Hever stop falling.
*hugs*
Phil xxx


Re: fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:14:42 AM AEST
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such a beautiful and intense poem, so many imense emotions entwined in feelings of love.
Awesome write.


Re: fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:50:11 AM AEST
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Awww, Liquid...this is the essence of intimacy that we all long for. You have expressed it here with such feeling and depth. Bravo!
Stitch


Re: fall (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:01:38 AM AEST
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very emotional and expressive, a great write, with great flow

pixie xx


Re: fall (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 02:42:10 PM AEST
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Amazing, sincere! I love the repetition. So honest, my friend. Love creates that consuming desire. I want to fall faster than I am too, but sometimes I am too cautious...maybe it's for the best?
Excellently written.
~Carrie~


Re: fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:38:08 PM AEST
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Powerful! I love the simplicity of expression, multiplied, making it the more strong. Excellent, truly so.

Nai anar caluva tielyanna

Andrew




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